Friday, March 2, 2012

Theses, kinda like feces.

I am fully aware that this is rough, but it's an idea nonetheless:

Through their non-violent approach, protesters have enlightened outside viewers and politicians to the inequality in government politics; they demand changes. The Occupy Movement has not only effected modern day view on the middle class, but will have a lasting effect on future political laws and policies.

1 comment:

  1. the semicolon transition in that one sentence is a little weird.

    but besides that good job!